Music Video Pitch + Feedback

To get feedback, I posted the following to my personal Tumblr blog:

Feedback:
Question 1:
Does the narrative suit the song and genre?

• Narrative suits the song and genre well.

Question 2:

Do the Locations seem appropriate to the narrative?

• The locations all fit with the story

Question 3:

Would you enjoy a music video such as that proposed? Why/Why not?

• Seems aimed at a younger and more 'angsty' audience

Question 4:

Is there anything about this idea that you think would be better done differently?

• The ending could be fleshed out more